Let’s Pretend

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Here we are again. In that all too familiar place. I have lost count of how many times I have found myself here. Despite my very best endeavours, my valiant intentions and earnest dedication I am stood in his hallway of despair. Some time ago this hallway was a welcoming place where polished tiles gleamed and marble pillars glinted. The air was filled with the scent of jasmine, bright sunlight pouring in through the glass dome high above. So many corridors and doorways led from this hallway, offering exciting and intriguing possibilities, new experiences and enthralling opportunities. I can still picture you when you had crossed the threshold, invited into my world and you stood open-mouthed impressed and amazed by the grandeur. With a typically generous and expansive sweep of my arm I offered you the free run of those corridors and rooms. You took full advantage of my generosity and why not? You were a very welcome and special addition.

Now look at us. Your failure has made this a cold and desolate place. The dome has suffered as a consequence of you frequent eruptions of frustrated anger, the once clear panes now either broken or smeared with the grime of your betrayal. The sun has not shone into this hallway for a long time, in fact, neither of us can remember when it last did so. The tall pillars are cracked and chipped, testament to your unwarranted assaults on our person as your forked tongue of criticism lashed out at us. The tiles are fractured and uneven causing you to regularly trip and fall to the floor, the cold slap of your downfall a stark reminder of the change that has gripped this place. You can hear the low moan of the wind as it billows, wuthering and gusting, seeking entrance through the broken windows and dilapidated shutters. That is the wind isn’t it or is it the tortured protestations of the shades and spectres which still haunt this hallway? Sometimes you see them, the forlorn figures which glide haplessly along the dirty passageways, heads bowed as they seem to be seeking something. Whenever you see them you feel a strange sense of familiarity and understanding with their plight even though you are unsure who they are. No doubt a consequence of the empathic traits which still cause you to remain here.

I let you walk these beautiful corridors. I allowed you to marvel at the statues, the ornaments which adorned the walls and alcoves, mesmerising you with their beauty. You felt loved, you felt content and you felt safe as you walked this place never needing or wanting to step back through the door that you once entered all that time ago.

Now you are sat on the icy floor, your hands clasped together and raised in a gesture of contrition and pleading. Your face is etched with wounding woe and the lines of desperation evidence your determination to remain. I brandish the heavy iron key that will unlock the dark door which looms over you and which will reveal the doorway to the cold, uncaring and harsh would beyond, a world you have no desire to return to. I hold the key as I stand over you watching you and although I hear your voice I cannot discern what you are saying. You struggle to your feet, weakness pulling at you as you pull down the sleeve of the tattered garment which you wear and you begin to rub at a nearby pillar. You spit on it and frantically try to remove the grime as if you are showing me that the damage can somehow be undone. You turn and look at me, hand still moving back forth and I see that eternal optimism in your eyes. That look which once looked like paradise to me and now only serves to reinforce your selfishness in wanting to remain here after everything you have done and everything you have not done as you let me down. Again. The distortion that has surrounded your voice and now I can hear you as you are pointing to the windows and the doors which hang from their hinges, holes smashed into them.

” This place was once so beautiful and you have let it fall into neglect, why have you done this? I just do not understand. I helped you keep it shining and in a pristine condition but then you just lost interest, you would not work with me anymore and it began to fall into decline. It was too much for me to maintain alone though heaven knows I tried, I really did. Not only did you not help me but you then started to hinder me, stopping me from carrying out my tasks, holding me back and diverting me.”

Why are you saying such things to me? Why are you seeking to pin the blame on me? Why are you trying to make me responsible for the demise of this once grand place? I shake my head and point the key at you, a clear signal of my intent. Your face twists and the tears start to form in your eyes. Perhaps they might fall into the now dry fountain and bring about restoration. Does such restoration hang from your sadness?

“Don’t make me leave, please I do not want this to end,” you plead, your eyes, which once shone with delight and joy, which are now glazed as your fear of abandonment starts to rise.

“This does not have to happen, ” you continue as you place a hand against my arm, ” let me stay, I only want us to be happy, to be as we once were. Surely we can do that? Our laughter once echoed through this place and it can again. We can repair the damage, it is not about who caused it, I can put that to one side, I just want us to be together and for us to rebuild what we once had. We did it once, I know we can again, let us join forces and re-create that wonderful time once more, let us admit sunshine and clean away the dirt and the hurt that seeks to envelope this place. We can fix the glass, mend the doors, scrub the floors and clean and tidy and make good. We can do it. I know we can. I can sense it deep inside you, I know it to be the case.”

Your words are impressive and burgeoning with hope. Perhaps it can be done but then you let us down and for that you must pay the price. That momentary consideration of allying with you and recovering what we once had is dispelled. We shake our head.

“It cannot be recovered. There is no hope to do so,” we say slowly.

A tear spills down your cheek and hovers on your chin as if unsure of where to go.

“Then let us at least pretend that we walk through gilded and fragrant halls once more. Please? We can pretend can’t we?”

Yes, we can pretend. It is all we ever do.

13 thoughts on “Let’s Pretend

  1. Diana says:

    Excellent! Love Sylvia Plath …HG’s posting brought Shirley Jackson to mind, as well> “The Tooth”~~

  2. Alice says:

    Nice words but words are just words.

    This time they sound like a broken record to me…

    “You always let me down.”
    “It is all your fault.”
    “I have to punish you.”

    It seems that you are just as stuck as some of the victims you made. Even more stuck, maybe.

    Thanks for everything & good luck!

  3. CC says:

    It is all narcs do, isn’t it, pretend…..yes this describes those last ditch efforts, sadly mine would go for years…pretending…it nearly took my soul, all I wanted was God to take me home.

    I’m relieved this is no longer my nightmare…..

  4. 1jaded1 says:

    Let’s not pretend…

    1. HG Tudor says:

      If you insist.

      1. 1jaded1 says:

        It was more of a request. I didn’t use the polite word…please. Shame on me. I accept responsibility for that.

  5. Maddie says:

    Oh dear G… not with me 🙂 xxx

  6. Steeviann says:

    Whoa. A very good read HG.

    Very simple, a blank wall and you can’t see the possibility of beautiful picture on this wall. Always blank, no matter how hard you try. This is how it was described to me by HIM in the beginning before I realized what was sitting in front of me.

    (They were being really crazy
    They were on the come.
    And you know what mummy?
    Everybody was being really crazy.
    Uh huh. The monsters are crazy.
    There are monsters outside.)

    The grand prize if you can tell me the song these lyrics are from. It suits you. Me too.

    Nice picture you have for the visual. Did you pick this? The desolate background, interesting choice. It looks familiar to me.

    1. HG Tudor says:

      Thank you.

      No More I Love Yous by Annie Lennox.

      I did pick the picture.

      What is my prize?

  7. Fool me 1 time says:

    You do not have to pretend anymore!

    1. nikitalondon says:

      Yes finished. Now its the real thing 😍😍

  8. Poetic_Me says:

    HG, I know you do not like poetry being Posted on your blog and I often try to sneak it in. But this is too serendipitous not to respond to. I changed the poem to my Wordress Gravatar. When I changed it I thought about this post immediately from When it was originally posted on your blog.
    I want to include it now for your appraisal. As I think it is relevant to this article and the fact I changed it prior to you reposting this, is quite unusually sympatic. Thank you.

    Conversation among the Ruins

    Through portico of my elegant house you stalk With your wild furies,
    disturbing garlands of fruit And the fabulous lutes and peacocks,
    rending the net Of all decorum which holds the whirlwind back.
    Now, rich order of walls is fallen; rooks croak
    Above the appalling ruin;
    in bleak light Of your stormy eye, magic takes flight
    Like a daunted witch, quitting castle when real days break.
    Fractured pillars frame prospects of rock;
    While you stand heroic in coat and tie,
    I sit Composed in Grecian tunic and psyche-knot,
    Rooted to your black look, the play turned tragic:
    Which such blight wrought on our bankrupt estate,
    What ceremony of words can patch the havoc?
    Sylvia Plath

  9. nikitalondon says:

    Move on HG ❤️❤️❤️. Brand new constructions are awaiting for you😍. One must not return to what broke you. 😘

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